REDI !!!!

The story sequal In the Lift "The Hot News" is up.......read it and tell me what u think.......
Do you have any suggestion about where else i should or could post my stories.......i think poting by blog is not very effective
If u have any idea please let me know !!! Thank You !!!
p/s : Feedback is much needed......please let me know what u think...but don't be harsh